Maya Puspadini
54651
Nk2-10
Writing 1
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54651
Nk2-10
Writing 1
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In veteran street as my hometown, i can be easier to go wherever I want because the location is really strategies. Talking about the weather , I think it’s really hot but my grandfather said to me, there is no pollution too much over there .The environtment has many plant everywhere. We can see it on the right side and leftside in regularly.I would like to go jogging around there to get the fresh air. Usually my brother and I go to the beach for refresh our mind with the fresh air because it is about 500 metre from my home, about. Most of people called it “Taplau”. In the evening there is so many people to go there especially If we talk about the food, it has so many kind of food that we want to eat, such as grilled fish,shrimp, and the other seafood
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I think that is all make me miss so much. That is way I like to live over there than my new home as my hometown but if you want to know where the interesting place in padang, please let me go.
Guidance Counselor : LENI MARLINA
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I think that is all make me miss so much. That is way I like to live over there than my new home as my hometown but if you want to know where the interesting place in padang, please let me go.
Guidance Counselor : LENI MARLINA



i think your blog is too short,,
BalasHapusi suggest you to make more idea in your writing,,,
he
but,,
i like the picture in your blog,,
heeeeeeee
that's all from me,,
I think you should pay attention to capital point, look at the paragraph 1 sentence 1 :)
BalasHapusand also note the spaces .
you're picture so awesome !
I think that's all from me .
i think your essay is good enough...
BalasHapusbut you still hve mistakes in sentence structure and dictions..
so, i think you still need to revise it and still need improvement..
"i can be easier to go" (paragraph1 line3)
BalasHapuspay attention to capital word, it's supposed to be "I".
and you should add more information in your essay about Padang...
at all this is good essay..
keep spirit...